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curled by putrid judgment by ~dialsixsixsix:icondialsixsixsix:





standing on the edge of  a cliff,she was looking passed the ocean for meaning. three steps to go until she drops herself down the abyss. "how sad could this life be?" she thought to herself. as she stood there, having second thoughts on ending her life, she took a step forward and saw a school of fish hurdling through the waves, altogether prancing up and down, in circles and all about. synchronized in gliding, they searched for the paths to where they must be. "that can never happen to me." the pessimistic beast uttered to herself. then she took another step forward, and by the rocks, a shell, alone, stagnant, no one beside it to prance upon, glide upon and move about, laid there. a creature from the inside then crawled slowly, taking its time, carrying its home, and not knowing where to go, spontaneously moved about in circles. looking at the frightful sight, she hurriedly stepped on the shell and dropped herself down the abyss.
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Author's Comments

this is contradicting the lesson i wanted the reader to understand..

i wanted to let myself believe that living beings cannot be alone,because we ourselves are not an island. haha. i proved myself wrong when i tried making this short fictional narrative. my perception of lonesome really does exist even with the presence of other creatures.


currently listening to :
the river flows frozen by eternal tears of sorrow..

"Like frozen leaves
We are falling
On to the soil so barren and cold
The rays of sun
No more warming
Our hearts now so cold"

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:icon3v3rdr34m3r:
I really like this. :D

(Also, wanna know a funfact? it's actually spelled "judgment," and you can check the dictionary if you want, since I never believed anyone when they told me that until I actually looked. Stupid English language. xD)

Anyways, love it! :D

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"This is how the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper."

"I thought it would be nice to lie down and close my eyes. It never occurred to me that I am already asleep."
:icondialsixsixsix:
thanks. haha. wow, you're right. all this time i really thought it's spelled with an "e". haha. thanks for the fact! i'll change it now. lol =P
:icon3v3rdr34m3r:
You're welcome. xD

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"This is how the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper."

"I thought it would be nice to lie down and close my eyes. It never occurred to me that I am already asleep."

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